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Wednesday, January 29, 2025

How to Make a Good Poem Better


The ease of publishing our own blogs, websites, and social media posts have encouraged many poets and writers to get their work out there for the general public and/or specialized groups to see. While this provides a welcomed outlet for self-expression, feedback from readers, promotion of a cause or mission, and the incentive to keep writing, it’s also resulted in unsubstantiated “facts,” opinions best kept to ourselves, and some really sloppy writing!

If that smushed your toes, I’m sorry about that, but I truly hope you’ll show your work respect by checking info, using good grammar, and learning to say what you want to say in a concise and winsome manner that shows an awareness of your readers. These tips for poets might help writers in all genres:


  • Write as you always have. Then put the work aside and go onto another poem or project.

  • When you’re pretty much forgotten what you said and how you said it, go back and read your work aloud, paying particular attention to the sounds and sense of what you’re saying.

  • Pretend someone else wrote those lines! Then read them again.
     
  • If anything causes you to stumble, take that as a clue to self-edit.
     
  • Read the poem aloud again to hear if you repeat what you’ve said. If so, pick the best phrase or line.

  • For poems longer than a dozen lines, get radical! Cut unnecessary words. Tighten the lines. Poems that go on and on usually lose their impact – and your readers!

  • As you revise your work, use a light touch and save the heavy rhymes for humor. Too many rhymes jammed into a poem or repeating the same sound again and again get monotonous. Worse, such rhymes typically twist a sentence into something that makes little sense. To be blunt, they’re a way of showing off!
     
  • Sometimes it helps to wean yourself from rhymes or any other technique you frequently use and write something totally different. For instance, if you’ve been writing long poems, try writing haiku or other traditional form that confines your work to a particular length.

  • Read poems by other people – lots of poems! An anthology is a good place to find your soon-to-be favorite poets.
     
  • Strive for excellence, and keep on writing! 

 

 

©2025, Mary Harwell Sayler


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